NICE! Don't be afraid to expand on your levels. You don't seem to be incorporating any horizantal travel, you're emphisizing on vertical. Get big, think big, give the player somewhere to "travel" to.
I agree with Justin. This is a prehistoric journey for the main character and the player. I second the notion of "Get big, think big." Keep up the good work.
Nice to finally start seeing some levels from you! Though I do agree with Justin and Joe, this here looks like what you'd see on just one screen, rather than the whole level that you scroll through. Great start though, can't wait to see more!
I see some improvement that's for sure but you need to stop making these one sentence posts! I have no idea what your thought process was and I don't see a solid starting point, goal, or any descriptions of the paths and there is no placement for the enemies/mountable dinosaurs.
Did you search for the Sonic or Super Mario level layouts I told you about? Those are the ones that I said might be the most useful for you to get ideas from.
my level sketch
NICE! Don't be afraid to expand on your levels. You don't seem to be incorporating any horizantal travel, you're emphisizing on vertical. Get big, think big, give the player somewhere to "travel" to.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Justin. This is a prehistoric journey for the main character and the player. I second the notion of "Get big, think big." Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteNice to finally start seeing some levels from you! Though I do agree with Justin and Joe, this here looks like what you'd see on just one screen, rather than the whole level that you scroll through. Great start though, can't wait to see more!
ReplyDeleteI see some improvement that's for sure but you need to stop making these one sentence posts! I have no idea what your thought process was and I don't see a solid starting point, goal, or any descriptions of the paths and there is no placement for the enemies/mountable dinosaurs.
ReplyDeleteDid you search for the Sonic or Super Mario level layouts I told you about? Those are the ones that I said might be the most useful for you to get ideas from.
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